Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 214,236 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Put To Shame - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Animal from inside
In rebellion to invade
But I keep it under control
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Comments about Put To Shame by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    Not something I could relate to...


    Ad Johnson3 minutes ago
    But quite well written. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    Superb sir


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha7 minutes ago
    Well said. Straight to the point whom you refer.
    Very elderly thinking.
    Poem came out of experience.
    Comment +1
    good flow (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    Ruth Courtney7 minutes ago
    good emotion famous good ending (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    eally nice


    rashidmukkum2 minutes ago
    Its a good poem, I do not know when it will turn
    Into strict wild animal term
    Forget about human relation
    And inflict injury in question these lines show us his skill as poet.
    Comment +1
    its fine (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    Zainab Qamer6 minutes ago
    very complicated i didntt understand but i think it has some deep meaning
    Comment +1
    uhh... what? (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    Stephen Gagne7 minutes ago
    Not English. This reads as if it were written by Andy Kaufmann's stereotypic foreign person, Latka Gravas (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Animal from inside
    In rebellion to invade (Report) Reply








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