Puzzle Poem by Amitava Sur
Puzzle
Puzzle:
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(Then) :
How can I assert you –
My loving sweet heart
That how much you’re closer to me
And how much do I love thee,
I was telling the same – number of times
I could not live or dream devoid of you.
You stopped me smilingly –with a kiss
That I don’t need this to tell you again
(Now) :
Leaving this earth, you proved me wrong
That without you even, I can live alone.
Oh’ my dear - Oh’ my love -
Now, though I agree that I was wrong
But now I’m dying every moment
Alone alone just I am alone
In this crowded earth without you
I am alone.
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Amitava (5.10.2013)
A very fine poem of love expressing the pain of separation.
in deed melancholy and represent expression from the bottom of heart.
Because when love sealed the kiss to silent, it already read what you want to tell inside and Pain is a waiting moment, to mix all colorful happiness to be one light again... being far from all of them not mean we out of touch but it just amplify loudness what in heart more_Soul
Being separated from the one you love is life's harshest lesson, it takes you from the one you love, yet increases your love in their absence, making you feel more intensely the pain of losing them. It is a vicious cycle, time moves us away slowly, yet the pain never dissipates and when remembered knocks us into an ocean of despair for a while. Death for those who are left behind is the cruelest side effect of true love, I think. Thank you again, Amitava for another beautiful poem, you leave a little of yourself with us in every poem. It is treasured in our hearts. RoseAnn
So heartfelt with truth of the terrible pain of seperation! Great write!
love is eternal. it decreases with time like setting it on the back burner. but it never ends. nice ink
Nicely written with love and admiration.The beauty of love does not go away. It merely fades with time. I have a poem titled If We Ever Meet Again. Please read when you have time. Nice write.
the puzzle of separation indeed is harsh......................like life and death, love and separation seem to be two sides of a single........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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good love good write, thanks.