Quantum Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Quantum

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Soaked in a blend of mysticism and mayhem
She began to question the course of her life
And for the first time in her solitary life
She saw herself in the identity - mirror
And explored the possibility to fly from the lonely life
Which kept her confined for years
Under dark clouds of love
That was moving nowhere
Other than killing her thought process
Finally, she shed her shells of breathless
To take a fresh leaf from life.

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational,life,self discovery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Mysticism and mayhem both are wonderfully observed in this poem that speaks about quantum love which is expressed in each line. Discovering life through this is fantastic definitely. Nice sharing....10

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2015

Thanks much Kumarmaniji

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Deepak S S 22 July 2020

Nothing can be better than this poem for women liberation.10 On

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Bharati Nayak 13 November 2015

Finally, she shed her shells of breathless To take a fresh leaf from life- - - - -The quest for meaning and purpose of our life is the first step towards creation.Finding a creative outlet to our deepest emotions liberate our soul.- - - - Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.

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T Rajan Evol 13 November 2015

Inspiring, true character of great womens sketched here Asim.

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Sanjukta Nag 13 November 2015

This is really a great inspirational poem. Self realization is something that doesn't come in an easier way. However, your poem made it so clear with beautiful poetic expressions.10++

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

nothing like a change to make life better thanks Asim-10

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