Quickie-Diner Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Diner

Rating: 5.0


I sat down and waited for my dinner
When it came it was a real stunner
Decorated in a beautiful blue color
I could only stare and stare in wonder

Quickie-Diner
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 12 January 2017

that frog on leaf fooled me again into thinking it was a hungry snake. or one which likes to look at butterflies. bri :)

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Loke Kok Yee 14 January 2017

Bri, Your eyes must be getting as bad as mine Though I'm more to double visioned incline But I'm grateful that you are spending time To write your comments on my crappy lines Bro

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Melvina Germain 29 October 2015

Well I cow yrtainly hop it tasted as good as it looked. I love how you match up the photos with your Limerick.....

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Valsa George 20 October 2015

Wow..... wow! I am spell bound! From where do you gather these images, I wonder! Loke, you are racing ahead!

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Wow so nicle written limerick on life, Amusing.....10+++

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