Quickie-Smoking And Drinking Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Smoking And Drinking



Smoking will make you a high risk case
The effects are seen all over your face
If you smoke and drink at a fast pace
You’ll be a forerunner in the death race

Quickie-Smoking And Drinking
Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 03 November 2015

Absolutely.. and you have said it wonderfully through our poem and that well chosen picture.

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Valsa George 03 November 2015

Quite right! A grave warning to chain smokers and addictive drunkards!

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Melvina Germain 02 November 2015

Where did you find that picture, like most smokers, I don't think he cares...You keep me smiling first thing in the morning Loke Kok Yee.....

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Rajnish Manga 02 November 2015

Very nice. A poem with a message through humour. Lovely write. Thanks.

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Hans Vr 02 November 2015

I sure like this one. Cute and very wise.

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