Quiet Deaths Poem by Raj Arumugam

Quiet Deaths



a photo album
is one’s pictorial grip on one’s life -
a slippery hold maybe,
but comforting nonetheless,
as one holds it close to one’s chest:
my friend declares, and pulls out
a personal volume of pictures


my friend
leans forward
to the carefully-kept open album,
index finger on a picture
of a man standing in the open fields;
and my friend whispers:
he was my neighbor;
he was a good man, kind
and always cheerful;
devoted to his family and friends and work;
much liked by all; he’s dead…
he died just last year…


and I look up at my friend
and I am offered a nervous smile;
and the unspoken words
slip into the spaces
between the pages of the album:
someday we too shall be gone
and perhaps someone
will point with a finger or cursor
and utter affectionate words in memory
of these quiet deaths
that remove each from one’s landscape…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 29 September 2009

Raj I really love when you do this style of poem. It's true; we feel a nervousness in the realization that everyone slowly goes away; sooner or later, young or old, we all end up the same. This is wonderfully subtle.

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Kesav Easwaran 29 September 2009

remarkable ending lines...your poem finger touches the softest corner of the reading mind...thanks...10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 29 September 2009

Beautiful poem Raj, little subdued perhaps, but i enjoyed it immensely. I can also identify with the photo album viewing and pointing at dead people............. Milica

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