Quintessential Failed Romantic Poem by M.J. Lemon

Quintessential Failed Romantic

Rating: 5.0


I tried speaking Tree
but realisation dawned
I knew more French words

Thursday, January 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,poetry,romanticism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 February 2020

...And the time you when you realise this, you made a Senyu...but written in English ;) : p :) I bet you know more french LOL joking

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Mj Lemon 01 February 2020

Thank you, Soul! And yes....but I think the last line in English just adds something...

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Richard Wlodarski 30 January 2020

M.J., no matter my mood, your poetry never disappoints! It makes me laugh. It inspires me. It challenges me. And when I'm having a stressful week, like this one, it uplifts me. Tres bien! Et Merci Beaucoup!

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M Asim Nehal 06 May 2021

Ha ha ha fantastic one MJ...Liked the romanticsm part.

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Mj Lemon 28 August 2020

Richard, thank you so much! Your comment is priceless...almost a tanka, a perfect tanka...Thanks again, my friend.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 August 2020

Ah! To be in love with Mother Nature...and then find out...Parisienne women are so much lovelier. Where's the cheese and wine?

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Susan Williams 15 March 2020

Ha! I still think you a romantic at heart though you failed to bark at trees and get to the root of the problem but I am sure you will turn over a new leaf and try again. I truly think trying French on them might work- trees are such a shady lot. Thank you for cheering me up.

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Mj Lemon 15 March 2020

Aha! Trees that leave one with a barking laugh! Thank you so much, Susan.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 March 2020

Tree hmm, are you in love with trees like I am too? I'm what they call a tree hugger. This is a cool fantastic poem in brief. Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too titled, ' pink mania inking'

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Mj Lemon 05 March 2020

It is indeed so hard not to love trees! Thank you so much, SzK! !

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