####quit! ...While You'Re Ahead! Poem by Dee Wright

####quit! ...While You'Re Ahead!

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And God created
the world.

And God created
the light.

And God created
the this & that

of that & this.

And I thought:
“Mmmmm...man...that’s good! ”

But then

God
(surpassed himself)

created

woman

And I thought
He was

“...absolutely
great! ”

So, I said:
“Ya can’t do better than that mate! ”

“Quit...while you’re ahead! ”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 03 May 2008

“Mmmmm...: D Wright...that’s good! ”

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Flora Gillingham 25 April 2008

Man says to supposed women's libber dismissively: 'So, you want to be equal with us then? ' Woman (sorrowfully) : 'Actually, we'd sets our sights rather higher.' :) F

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