Rain Poem by keturah bailey

Rain

Rating: 4.8


Rain drops keep fallin in my hair
Since you been gone im so out of place
This love i have to fight
Hes on my mind all the time
Let the rain take me away
My emotions keep running away i feel like a inner child
I need your smile to brighten up my life
I need to look deep into your eyes
Tell me this is a dream because i don't want to feel like this
You took my heart from me
I don't want to be without you
I can't sleep without you here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 15 December 2008

i can really relate to this one. this one is my favorite. great job.

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Hannah Martin 23 October 2008

I like this poem! Very well written...rythems on and off (which isn't that very good) but other than that...It's lovely! :)

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Subham Dutta 10 September 2008

Hi Keturah Bailey, This is a very good poem.

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Abbey Rigney 28 June 2008

this is really good: ]] I luv it

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Christopher Leone 30 May 2008

your a great poet...expressing good emotion, you should write about the strengh in yourself without needing or wanting... :)

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