Rain Poem by shameka jones
Rain
rain
rain, rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
rain, rain, rain up above from the skies
rain, rain, rain pour here and clean my soul
rain, rain, rain there will be rain here, there will be rain there
rain, rain, rain wash away my pain
rain, rain, rain wash away my debts to pay
rain, rain, rain so tired i felt wash away my guilt
rain, rain i will do anything for you to cover my tears of shame
I love this poem because of rain is a nature which similar to tears from heaven.
I think that was an interesting and touching piece. I remember how I felt when I was upset and how I loved to be just in the rain when I cried, allowing it to blend into my tears and calm my body and soul. Such a wonderful piece once more. Excellent job.
I love repetition of words in poetry. Its one of the things that makes poetry. I thought you covered every base you needed to and that kept it short enough to be a worthwhile read. GW62
simple wording, yet rhythmic and appealing. Kind I love.
I absolutley love this poem. i looked through all types of poems and none of them spoke to me the way yours did. I LOVE IT! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:48:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
hay i really luve ur poem :)