shameka jones


Rain - Poem by shameka jones

rain
rain, rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
rain, rain, rain up above from the skies
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Comments about Rain by shameka jones

  • Gold Star - 7,239 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/30/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    simple wording, yet rhythmic and appealing. Kind I love. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,954 Points * Sunprincess * (7/11/2014 10:59:00 PM)

    .........very nicely written....the rain can do all this.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vanessa Smith (8/15/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    Wow....just, wow............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lilly Rose (3/3/2010 3:20:00 PM)

    Love it Think you hit a spot there (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leah Farmer (8/25/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    I absolutley love this poem. i looked through all types of poems and none of them spoke to me the way yours did. I LOVE IT! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kareema Muhammad (7/31/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    hay i really luve ur poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Your Mama (6/9/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    suckish (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bussaba Kulkittiyanon (1/30/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    I love this poem because of rain is a nature which similar to tears from heaven. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kalan Rider (7/25/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    it reminds me of god (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ryan Thompson (7/24/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    i hope rain washes it all way,

    i like how you show that you can be healed and what not O.o (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (6/15/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    I love repetition of words in poetry. Its one of the things that makes poetry.
    I thought you covered every base you needed to and that kept it short enough
    to be a worthwhile read.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kashumaru Mizume (6/15/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    I think that was an interesting and touching piece. I remember how I felt when I was upset and how I loved to be just in the rain when I cried, allowing it to blend into my tears and calm my body and soul. Such a wonderful piece once more. Excellent job. (Report) Reply










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