rain sobbing
like a depressed mind
downpouring with hailstones
bursting despair and pouring grief
knitting the torn sleeves of mind
a poem, an unbroken thread of
words
and words
and words
my verse
like rain
drench and contain
kids
who search me
remember
my song
rain drops on their lips
rain again
flows again
dropp by drop
word by word
Kannada poem by Mamta G Sagar, Translated by O. L. Nagabhushana Swamy
It's nice, I found the opening lines quite powerful! I lost the thread for a moment with 'kids who search me', But then I saw what you are saying. And I like the poetry of it, the theme of 'return'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The fall of rain is described in a dramatic way. Well composed..