Rain Poem by Broken Angel

Rain

Rating: 5.0


I sit in the rain
It's so lonesome
Then you came and took me by the hand
The rain drips down are faces
You put your arm around me
Then the rain stops and the sun comes out
You looked at me, waiting for me to turn around
Then it happens...
Happened so fast
You kissed me
But i pushed you away
You tryed again and i walked away
And from that point on everything went down hill
Then one day you just left me here crying, dying
But now i know its for the better
: : end: :

written: 8/29/05

**this one is about my ex boyfriend**

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aashish Ameya 15 January 2006

nice one Ashley...full of emotion but little bit earthy...

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