'Rain' Poem by Aishaf Rehman

'Rain'

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You are a sky,
I am an earth.
We cannot meet
But I can feel your
Feelings through the rain.
Your feelings gives me energy,
Joy and makes me productive
And valuable.

Sunday, July 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: motivation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 27 August 2015

Lovely and captivating poem Aishaf, really enjoyed your imagery, especially: But I can feel your feelings through rain. Just those few words enlightened my mind, touching it's interior explicitly. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Ayman Parray 18 July 2015

Brilliant poem, Aisha. I love your blues poems, these are all amazing. Especially 'Rain'

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