Rain Again Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Rain Again

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No raining again and again
As you have made friendship with pain
Be firm and don't complain
Even if it rains. More and goes to drain

If it rains more then will be down pour
Result in sweet relations and not sore
Poets need to pray for not going away
But stay near and find the way

What even if you suffer!
What even if you differ!
What if you are not able to alter!
But alas! You are capable to cater

Poet dreamed of nice weather wonder
For getting ideas mixed with cloud’s thunder
Wait for good response from the reader
As he is known as poet or sender

He may be obsessed with more response
But always worried with comment clause
Readers may differ or praise his talent
But always welcome with nice comments

That is gesture for good
Nice stuff as energy and food
What else you need as rain
It is altogether nice for your complete gain

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

Gloria Rodikis Oh that is nice! 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1 person

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

Send message | DeleteIke I really like how each of your stanzas stand separate from each other in terms of thought, yet fit so well together as a whole. I really enjoyed reading your poem! ; -]

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

That is gesture for good Nice stuff as energy and food What else you need as rain It is altogether nice for your complete gain

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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