Perveiz Ali

Rookie - 313 Points ((08-02-1988 / Srinagar, j&k)

Rain Blessings - Poem by Perveiz Ali

Afternoon showers in mid summer were in blissful swing,
Nature's setting of a scene, a sweet romantic thing.

We sit in our abodes in our long and narrow lanes,
Watching the rain dash against our window panes.

Relief now from the scorching sun, tears from above,
We run out into the deluge, such wet coolness we love.

Our neighbors we hardly see, join us in a rain dance,
Rejuvenated with each soaking minute we wildly prance.

Warm sensations of pure love has piqued our souls,
Neighbors now hand in hand dance on muddy soles.

Strangers have come together, all delight, no fancy dressings,
All crops are saved with this gift from above, sweet blessings.


11/05/2014


Comments about Rain Blessings by Perveiz Ali

  • Rookie - 297 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/12/2014 10:02:00 AM)

    Wow... Fantastic piece of art, a brilliant write indeed. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 297 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/12/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    This is a really amazing piece of work. Really, I like this a lot (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,479 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/12/2014 9:37:00 AM)

    sweet blessing, good writing, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 12, 2014



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