Rain God 1 Poem by harsh sagi

Rain God 1

Rating: 2.8


As I lay peacfully,
on my porch looking,
at the dark, gloomy sky,
Cryinfg which is, its heart out.

Pondering I am,
Pain what is it, that
Causeth thee, to lose control,
Shed unstopped, so much tears.

Thou art still, our Hero,
For 'tis only the martyr,
who brings joy, to the vain,
Although consumed, by his own pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 09 August 2007

I like the whole Rain God thing, very nice descriptive language

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Princess Me 08 August 2007

Oh I really like it. I love it! I relate a lot to the rain..it helps me reflect...it is like a cleansing of the soul. A ten! Princess

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