Rain, My Reflection Poem by khoj agawal

Rain, My Reflection

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when i walked all the way home,
suddenly they came on me,
all little little of them,
just took my dryness away.
my lips broadened,
to expess that i was blown away.
i really wish that some one was there to,
see me all defeated,
to hold me and pass the warmth,
so that there would be no,
victory and loss,
no achivement or regret but,
just the moment,
which made me miss,
all the owners of the face,
which made history in the series of my breath.
shared their moments,
to add a meaning for this little life.
i dont no weather they flew from my own eyes,
or it was the sky,
we both cried together,
as a salute to,
all who who made me,
my identity.
i wish u were there,
just,
neither to hold me,
nor to walk with me,
nor to share that silence,
but just.
for that moment to get down in my history again,
so that,
the next time,
in these small cold rain,
i find another reason,
to be blown away.
and a dropp from me,
will add to the millions ahead..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 06 July 2010

abstract lines that invite deep thought, nice reflective poem

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Jay P. Narain 05 July 2010

Good poem. I like it.

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