Anoop Lokkur

Rookie (22/01/1985 / Bangalore)

Rain Rain Rain


Rain Rain Rain,
Up above from the skies
Youu come,
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  • Rookie Jade Leven (12/29/2007 12:38:00 AM)

    I liked your metaphors. It was well written and had a musical quality. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Preeti - is here! (10/19/2006 9:01:00 AM)

    Annop, its very beautifully written.

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  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (10/7/2006 7:15:00 PM)

    This is lovely, Anoop. It has a good structure, with its repetition and shape. 'Seven colours you bring together' is lovely, as is 'tiny silver crystals trickle from above.' fondly, Alison (Report) Reply

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