Dr subhendu kar

Rookie - 460 Points (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)

Rainbow Curling - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

RAINBOW CURLING

I swear and swear me when rainbow curling
In the premises of her love and life delight
When tears of joy searching the redemption
To quench the thirst of smiles imbecile

The mist of love infallible as I do all peer
Sizzling across the petals of rose fragrant
In the bondage yet unfazed and unflinching
Yet unmeasured in all dimensions surmised

winds of fragrance carrying message I do love
thrums me and my universe to rouse my anger
that trembles along the corridor of my time
tossing on colors of rainbow into realm ecstatic,


Comments about Rainbow Curling by Dr subhendu kar

  • Rookie - 19 Points Emancipation Planz (10/13/2007 9:44:00 PM)

    Well done, a full spectrum of emotions explained more fully than any pot of gold that may also await. One Peace at a Time.. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,136 Points Kee Thampi (7/2/2007 11:37:00 PM)

    When again snow falls words makes in its lovewinds of fragrance carrying message I do love
    thrums me and my universe to rouse my anger
    that trembles along the corridor of my time
    tossing on colors of rainbow into realm ecstatic, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lillian J. (7/2/2007 11:21:00 PM)

    Nice work and descriptive imagery.

    Lilly :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raveendran . (6/29/2007 10:54:00 AM)

    I am fascinated by the complex- brilliant imagery. Good job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 17, 2011


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