Rainbow Dream Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Rainbow Dream

Rating: 5.0


A day dreary diamond dream
Smiled at me like a silver beam
Spreading its hues around my neck
And mesmerized me with its divine look
I offered myself to grow it at best
And never found a moment to rest
Drew a sketch of golden bow
And painted a garden of green meadow
When lovely flowers smiled in yellow
Sad memories sunk below
As the target reached its velvet
One could walk on a silky carpet
There was a tinge of lovely red
Akin to the bow of bloomy bed
The navy blue sang in melody
Touching its nadir above the sky
When rainbow dream glittered at height
Flapping its shades towards light
For me, it was a delightful sight!

Thursday, February 16, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is a dream!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 16 February 2012

Live without dream is always fantastical life with no boundary and inhibition...we can control what to green and what to colors and when eyes lost trust to mind then it could change to nightmare and let the sweet turn sour...so be sweet in dream and you will be great in tasting your ethereal life hahahaha...jking...it's a nice poem with pricey imagery! ! ! ! _Unwritten soul

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Gordon Tseng 17 February 2012

Rekha in wonderland? What a lovely picture!

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Madan M 18 February 2012

a lovely world of meadows filled with a bit sorrows and tears

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Elena Sandu 19 February 2012

I read over and over this poem and every time I perceive it different.Wonderful write dear friend! Life is not always as happy as a swing, we have to make it ourselves in every way we can, even out of a hanging rope..cheers to the transform of dreary a dream into a beautiful poem.Thank you!

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Hans Vr 19 March 2012

This poem is pleasure for the ear with its very melodious rhymes and the pictures it provokes in our mind are a pleasure for the eye. It has everything one can expect from a good poem. Excellent, Rekha. Keep writing, this is superb poetry.

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Dead Leaf 15 March 2012

a great poem///////////good job

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

good rhyme and good flow. a great write.

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Ramesh Rai 24 February 2012

a nice sketch of dreamland

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Walterrean Salley 22 February 2012

And for me, this was a delightful read. Paints a vivid picture. Well crafted. 10. Also, I would be honored to have you visit my page.

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