Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,686 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Rainbow In Motion Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Red, orange, yellow

green, blue, indigo- violet
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Comments about Rainbow In Motion Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Gold Star - 7,678 Points Neela Nath (8/24/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    Each and every word has given color to your imagination.The seven colors Rainbow shows give birth to new hope.Lovely write! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (6/28/2014 5:56:00 PM)

    ...............loved reading every stanza.....and next time I see a rainbow I will definitely make a wish... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rachel Branscombe (1/15/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    It's beautiful. I can imagine the rainbow with all it's colours (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jinny Kim (1/15/2013 8:15:00 PM)

    I love how all of the little sections are haikus... And as hard as it is to write a beautiful haiku, you've wrote so many on the same topic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Djinnga Fairbairn (9/15/2009 3:32:00 AM)

    this is so beautifully written..I could see each colour of the rainbow...embracing my heart...whispers of the endless sky...reassuring....I am here....I exist....if only you can reach out...patiently awaiting.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Diana Teo (9/7/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    this one is really good
    i like it

    please do the same to mine =]

    thanx

    -diana teo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christina Iuso (8/19/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    this poem is beautiful the first verse i was hooked great job lorraine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 350 Points Alice Vedral Rivera (6/18/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    So many different ways to view rainbows - rainbows are truly inspirational and the rainbows in Washington State are magnificent.

    avr (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (6/8/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    It is not a rainbow in motion. This is a flowered, colorful comet in motion within the magic kaleidoscope of universe.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie faygo^042809= ) (6/6/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    i like it very much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noha El3wdy (5/25/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    Rainbow.................the lovliest natural scene. its really inspiring
    thnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 496 Points Subbaraman N V (4/11/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    Absolutely great! So much in so small! Greatest creation of Nature beautifully presented! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Lyday (4/8/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    Lovely imagery of an admirable description of the rainbow. Elegant depiction of many different ways of viewing it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Weber (4/8/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    This is as delicate as the celestial dance in the skies and as piercing as a sun breaking through the heavens. I enjoy the anthropomorphic elements and the progression in this sprawling work, Lorraine: the rainbow of delight within all of us. Universally appealing while effortlessly ponderous. The theme of the hidden colors within all visible light works well within the haiku form. You've managed to present an articulate and engaging poem! Thanks for sharing! Excellent work; sorry about the delay on my reciprocation to your open kindness. Warm regards, John. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Jim Norausky (4/4/2009 9:33:00 AM)

    A few words of praise are not complimentary enough for this excellent poem of so many thoughtful and creative Haiku verses. Truly outstanding.10+++++. Jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ria Villaflor (3/28/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    I liked this. Very vivid rainbow imagery. A ten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kirsten Gray (3/23/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Very nicely written. I especially enjoyed the last line. Thank you for suggesting that I read it.

    ~*Kirsten*~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alexzandria York (3/21/2009 8:06:00 PM)

    wonderful haiku its beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 390 Points Marie Shine (3/16/2009 4:59:00 PM)

    Lorraine, you are indeed 'The Queen of Haiku!
    What a beautiful though long series of Haiku.
    Words flow smoothly like The River Shannon.
    The mystic colours are stunning and I have given this amazing Haiku a 10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 449 Points Uriah Hamilton (3/15/2009 2:25:00 PM)

    A very lovely flow of words with mystical implications. (Report) Reply










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