Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 603 Points (Pakistan)

Rainbow Shades!



Rainbow shades
O rainbow shades!

Tell me are you wet or dry?
Did you paint the butterfly?
Did you add the green to grass?
Did you make the azure sky?

Rainbow shades
My rainbow shades!

Who tied you up in colored band?
What kind of art was in that Hand?
Did it keep the magic brush?
Did it hold the Deity's wand?

Rainbow shades
You rainbow shades!

Let’s stop the spur of riding time
Let’s sing the song of bells that chime
Let’s make this world so heavenly
Let’s play the tune of happy rime

Come hold the pulse of waning day
And let me see your twilight gray
Your sight gives joy to every heart
By coloring dreams you play your part

Let’s whisper love to candle flame
And share the secrets with the moon
Let’s shade the sketch of vales and dales
Let’s weave the fabric of our dreams
Let’s dream to see those dreams come true
Come, celebrate the falling tears

Leaving all deceiving guile
Let’s rejoice the hearty smile!

Submitted: Thursday, May 01, 2014

Topic of this poem: nature


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  • Gold Star - 22,142 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/29/2014 5:40:00 AM)

    Beauty of the paintings when compounded with poetic beauty such works of art are created. I know you are an artist but whether you have painted a rainbow or not, I don't know. But I believe you must have painted a rainbow on the canvas. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,611 Points Amitava Sur (6/24/2014 1:33:00 PM)

    Let’s weave the fabric of our dreams
    Let’s dream to see those dreams come true
    ...................................................................
    Let’s rejoice the hearty smile! .... excellent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Muhammad Ali (5/15/2014 1:17:00 AM)

    Good wishes aapi.
    This poem is so lovely and calm. And i think the moments of those feelings and the space (heart) were special. To feel something of nature in depth and paying thanks to Him. Very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,070 Points Anthony Di''anno (5/12/2014 8:09:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem Shahzia. Positive and upbeat. It has certainly raised my vibrational state :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,278 Points Tajudeen Shah (5/10/2014 12:57:00 AM)

    Beauty still resounds in mind's eternal walls, it seems, owing the music and beauty of your verses that permeates all over, while engaging, even with casual eyes and ears. Wonderful it is, enticing word pictures that demands special attention, so, drives still deeper into certain virgin wilderness of endless interpretations. Verses like these are not the results of deliberate beauty making, its rather impulsive emotional occurrence. God Bless, we the fellow bards delight in the sheen of your 'rainbow shades'. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,217 Points Neela Nath (5/7/2014 8:45:00 PM)

    How can you write such a beautiful song? I'm just speechless. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (5/6/2014 12:52:00 AM)

    Let’s stop the spur of riding time
    Let’s sing the song of bells that chime
    Let’s make this world so heavenly
    Let’s play the tune of happy rime

    Lovely rhyme...

    .Leaving all deceiving guile
    Let’s rejoice the hearty smile!

    Spreads a lot of positive energy......Shahzia! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,055 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/5/2014 1:29:00 AM)

    There is no pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.
    The reward is the beauty we see and feel every time we catch, or I should say,
    every time a rainbow catches us. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,007 Points Unwritten Soul (5/3/2014 11:30:00 AM)

    may it colors your life too with beautiful shades_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,508 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/3/2014 7:19:00 AM)

    All colors emanate from rainbow shades. We learn colors from nature. A beautiful poem for everyone to enjoy. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,583 Points Ramesh Rai (5/3/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    O' Rainbow!
    color the smiles of my sister with your effulgence to make her life with a cascading flow to irrigate the dry and dormant soul.
    O' Rainbow!
    bring the cloud of happiness
    to drizzle all pleasures in her life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (5/1/2014 11:47:00 PM)

    You missed this didi-
    Rainbow shades 'our' rainbow shades.........
    Though, I have seen a rainbow, quite a few times, I am too awestruck at its sight, to appreciate it through a poetry.......
    But I am glad that you recorded that wonderful scene in your write.............kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (5/1/2014 3:57:00 PM)

    Like this a lot! Nice imagery! (Report) Reply

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