Margaret Alice

Rookie - 3 Points (The Crystal Age / Pretoria - South Africa)

Raining Ouside – Survival Weather - Poem by Margaret Alice

It’s raining ouside – survival weather, saving our lives
but overcast weather makes me feel bad, I need the
sun to feel better; whenever I am down I go outside
and lie in the sun, when it’s rainy like now, there’s
no hope, all falls apart, the negative side of my mind
turns up, and I can’t change it into happy and content
regardless of what I do, say or eat – the only thing that
helps is sunshine, but rainy weather bringing the
water we need, is necessary – so I have to keep my
sadness inside while applauding the good effects
of rain in our lives…

Comments about Raining Ouside – Survival Weather by Margaret Alice

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (10/6/2007 7:50:00 PM)

    Oh Alice, I sooooooooooo agree with this one. The amount of sun on one's back makes such a difference to the amount of water one sees in the half filled glass. Great piece. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 13, 2011

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