Rains Of Peace Poem by koyel mitra

Rains Of Peace

Rating: 4.8


The bright, robust sun
and the dark clouds
are in the thick of fray.
Nobody can guess
who will win the fight.

The brawl reached its climax
with a wreak of vengeance
the nimbus clouds
engulfed the radiant sun.

A streak of lightning
forked across the sky,
heavy rumbling thunder
pouring on the earth
the rains of peace!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 18 September 2008

A soothing rainscape of peace after that war in the sky. Your poems should appeal to young and old alike. Love, SandraX

0 0 Reply
Linda Moore 21 September 2008

Wonderful, a Rain of Peace....10

0 0 Reply
Raja Basu 23 September 2008

Koel, u really have a great imagination power. U know how to dramatize a simple, everyday affair. The obvious sign of a great poet. Keep enriching the world of poems.

0 0 Reply

Though the theme looks a simple one, you managed, with your imagination to make it a symbolic and meaningful. Two supposed to be enemies (clouds and sun) in the end they mix their energy to produce something (rain) positive (peace) . I give it a 9+, thanks to your amazing method to paint and energise your message. (I am also glad that I am using an abundance of imagination in my own poems) . Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

0 0 Reply
David Threadgold 24 September 2008

Hi How dramatic the weather can be and you have captured it in action so well. A good read Regards Dave T.

0 0 Reply

I love the picture it brought to mind because the poem played a short story inside. Great Poem.

0 0 Reply
Rinzu Susan Rajan 09 October 2008

nice imagery of words u drew... :)

0 0 Reply
Harish K. Thakur 08 October 2008

nature imagery weaved well with opaque theme...well done

0 0 Reply
Michael Hubbert 04 October 2008

Koyel, Please forgive my lack of professional courtesy in not commenting on your poems sooner. I too enjoyed RAINS OF PEACE. I liked the idea of putting both the Sun and Clouds into the same ring, and letting them go at it! This time the clouds won! I'll be watching for the re-match! your friend Mike

0 0 Reply
Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

short simple and sweet

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success