Rainy July Night Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Rainy July Night
It’s a rainy July night
Sky with thunder light
A hard wind on fight
All made me lose sight
Of my path of right
It made my lips tight
Legs like fallen kite
Hands with red bite
Hearts beat on quite
Life seems like a trite
Moving looks like plight
With my hope in slight
I doubt my own flight
Now I feel like blight
With no ray of delight
I’m lonely in this fright
Gifted with hard sprite
A head like a wright
Always tells it’s alright
Walk it makes you bright
I listened it in polite
And wrote this recite
On a sheet of white
It’s my words tonight
Morning, light will invite
Your forced rhyming has a style of it's own. GOD, walks in the clouds upon the earth.
hey this is beautiful enjoyable piece indeed.. i liked the rhymes.. adds rhythm to it.. great write friend! ! ! 10+++ with love shan
I'm glad the rain don't last always. Very flowy and rhythmic. Lovely.
beautiful rhyming words to express your predicament of getting stuck outdoors during a July downpour. The darkness with chilling winds and the rains lashing at you with the roar of the thunder and the flashes of the lightning. Actually I miss all that. Thanks for reminding.
A collation of lines of July night in a perfect and astounding rhymes...though i echoe Leslie's opinion...Thanks! ! !
the continuation of the rhyme throughout made it read like an alliteration piece. nice
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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It made my lips tight Legs like fallen kite Hands with red bite Hearts beat on quite Life seems to cee a fiss