Random Poem by Federico del Corazón

Random

Rating: 5.0


The hit of kerosene
As bourbon empties
Inside of me

Staggering in the streets
With dirt on my sleeve.

Just another random night
I was just another random guy
I still don’t remember your name
Our hell is still the same

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Darkly 20 December 2011

I really liked this one. Conjures very vivid pictures.: D

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Scotty Dogg 19 December 2011

I love short poems. Unless you're Walt Whitman keep it short, and this is. You hit a home run, here.I like it. Mr. Walker exclaims 'great'' I don't agree. It's a good poem, not great. I like the title! S

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Dave Walker 19 December 2011

Like it. A really great poem. Really enjoyed reading it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, War Of Goodwill.

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