Rants And Tastes- My Heavenly Mother Poem by Vance Creston

Rants And Tastes- My Heavenly Mother

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The inferior quality of the light the Moon blows,

Lays not a secret, in the Sun’s brilliant glows.

Directing your energy on people,

Living in places sprawling miles apart,

Even where my contented goats fart,

In the solitude of my shepherd’s estate

Can I feel your heavenly warmth, shining radiantly down like darts.

Frustrated I must admit,

Of the beads of salty water you forced me to emit,

I still sincerely appreciate your generosity.

Though, yet again,

I enjoy the cooling land breeze that I gain

When you cease the day,

After I patiently seize the day

Wait, that is your doing too,

Right?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherri Coulter 07 October 2009

rants and tastes.were meant to be seized, , , , , , , , why a patient wait......great write......

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Kimberly Lindsey 07 October 2009

Quite impressive for a 13 year old. Quite impressive indeed, I think you did quite well, and look forward to your turn out.

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