rajendran muthiah

Rookie - 499 Points (16.03.1950)

Rape Is The Remnant Of Turcoman Virtues - Poem by rajendran muthiah

The Chinese incur into Ladakh with verve,
with woes and worries to India, to serve.
When the quake-victims somewhere, succour, deserve,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

The Turcomans were those born to Turks and Mongolian invaders.The Chinese tropps have intruded into Ladakh of India and pitched tents.

Comments about Rape Is The Remnant Of Turcoman Virtues by rajendran muthiah

  • Rookie - 21 Points Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (4/26/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    Nice attempt. Ideas are good. But the rhyming appears artificial. Make it natural. Do not deliberately force the lines to rhyme. It is not required. A greate poem need not rhyme at all! ! Feeling and flow are important... (Report) Reply

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