.rat Race Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

Very well written..... I am sure you will also write very soon about how you reached your goals and saw a new horizon from the top. Good work.

This is truly is the truth about life but there is soo much more than meets the eye......

you have your finger on what seems to be the pulse of life..i like the enery i felt in your poem.well done!

It is a phase of life you race and race until reach a void at the blank end..well conceived thought.. significant write...10 Rema

nicely composed a hard hitting fact of life put across in a mild tone

Lovely.simple and catchy.Too good a write.Similar subject in my poem Pellmell morning..if time permits kindly read it Thanks for sharing

I liked the rhythm of the second verse and I thought the ending was fine. It was a good theme and it was clear in meaning. That is why I recommend it. The rhythm was not consistent, and the rhyme was not the best. But overall, I felt it was a deserving poem. GW62

Reality of life beautifully depicted!

Timeless chase on humanity’s face To reach the top in vacant space; ..................... ... man yet defuddled by the aim spaceless trudging the path seems to be impetuous mind when slogged by the maddened world does he know what he does in rate race.....................what a wonderful poem that resounds even in the furrows of cliff, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

a poem on the tiring daily race of life...a racing rising raising poem this...