Rays Are Planning To Touch Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Rays Are Planning To Touch

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Rays are rising slowly in East
They are planning to touch us
On the peak of mountains we see
They are ruffling their feathers.

Wow, this is so wonderful to see
We hear songs of flying birds
Beauty of broken clouds again
They make canvas of sky rosy.

Pink and red mix to golden rays
To write new story of early dawn
All creatures are eagerly singing
This is planning and mind blowing.

Rays are now planning to touch us
To teach wisdom of God sure we feel
Having art of love again we dance
Rays are wonderful in East sky.

Tuesday, January 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,morning,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 19 January 2016

Although the sun has gone down here, your words are enlightening. TFS

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Joseph Anderson 19 October 2020

God instantly sends valuable rays of mercy and happiness for us. Each day is perfect example of it.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 January 2016

A nice metaphoric poem, with all the mastery of Mhakul.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 21 January 2016

A lovely poem just like peace giving....liked it....thank u for sharing :)

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Mj Lemon 21 January 2016

A magnificent work. The metaphor in the first stanza is unforgettable. And the message that each new day offers new life is wisdom to live by. A great poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

And live is ever ready. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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