! ! Read Me Now! ! Poem by Kieran J1996

! ! Read Me Now! !

Rating: 2.8


Read me and i'll tell you,
Of secrets hidden,
Dark things shrouded,
To the world forbidden,

Regrets buried,
Under heart and stone,
Never told nor given away,
Forevermore, always unknown,

Carrying always,
The backbreaking shame,
Of troubles past,
With you to blame

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent poem Kieran, the rhythm was smooth and expressions were great, nicely done.

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UnKnown Messenger 28 July 2010

Short but soulful poem. The last stanza has to be my favourite. But most importantly I just love the rhyme. Those regrets will always be unknown if you've never shared them with someone. All in all it's very good.

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zeo little bird 27 June 2010

kieran thats awesome i love it x can u please post sick on ur name pretty please x

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Revelation held in words. Well penned friend! ; D

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Claudia Krizay 14 June 2010

Very powerful poem in just a few lines- I like it especially because I can really identify with the feelings that the poem evoked- good job! C

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