Real Poem (Personal Statement) Poem by Rachel Zucker

Real Poem (Personal Statement)

Rating: 5.0


I skim sadness like fat off the surface
of cooling soup. Don't care about
metaphor but wish it would arrive
me. There's a cool current of air
this hot day I want to ride.
I have no lover, not even my love.
I have no other, not even I.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 24 June 2014

Was it Shmaltz? Just kidding. Yes, poets are a lonely bunch, As you say, sometimes they don't even have themselves. Well done

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Rachel Zucker

Rachel Zucker

United States / New York
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