Real Women Poem by Kateryna Polishchuk

Real Women

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Reality is nothing when you die,
So, why we always cry about time?
All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
They often speak to our nature prime.

All women are the stars in mystic sky,
They are an admiration, people`s heart,
They were described in poems poets by,
They look like clear crystals in the mart.

But time is gone, the idols pass away,
The world needs not a mother with a child.
Your eyes just look for dolls no words to say
Not for a woman whose worlds view is mild.

Remember women with sweet rose cheeks,
With gentle lips and often kind hand.
They were forever praised by each of Greeks.
Today we have another beauty mand.

But if you look for trust and real love,
Don`t find your heart among the paper walls,
Those pictures put the money you above,
Like leis the truth in darkness always stoles.

But look around, real angels live
In women who just go along the street.
They`ll be by you, in you will they believe
And give the love that you forever need.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 10 March 2012

A marvelous poem! Thank you very much.

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Kasandra Kerfont 10 March 2012

Very beautiful concept, and rather truthful, I think. I like this.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2017

All women like gold stars in mystic sky, But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, And give the love that you forever need. love women, care and concern, the woman in the street... nice view of life and love..... you play with contrasts in this poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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thanks a lot) for your time

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Dev Anand 14 April 2016

But look around, real angels live In women who just go along the street. They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need. beautiful lines of the real woman who is love in person. thank you very much for this poem. love reading it..... dev

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thank you for your time) and comments

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Chinedu Dike 04 August 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2012

They`ll be by you, in you will they believe And give the love that you forever need... that is real essence of life.. welcome dear poetess. so kind of you....

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 March 2012

Superb poem Ekaterina, absolutely wonderful......

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