Really Miss You Poem by Mustafa Khairallah

Really Miss You

Rating: 5.0


When I was away
I always missed you
and on my way
I thought about nothing but you
I thought my pain will heal
when I see you
My heart took me
to where i will be with you
and my legs followed
cause every piece of me longed to you
and on my way home
I read letters sent by you
as my only joy
was about thinking of you
I resisted my pain
As I knew I would meet you
Even just for seconds
I will look at you
But regret I came home
and vere met you
cause i went away again
again I long for you
with increase in my pain
cause when I saw you
I couldnt forget your face
I was just a fool to leave you
I really miss you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 January 2009

your heartprint, thanks for sharing

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Jose Murguia 18 January 2009

beatiful poem a really well written piece of art!

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Aiswarya. T.anish 18 January 2009

nice write...Keep writing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 January 2009

Missing someone is really a great feeling of love. Nice piece of write.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 January 2009

Treasure your love when you got one.Missing a loved ones is like a disease.Nice piece Mus.

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liked how you used the subject in the peice to rhyme throughout.. nice

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