.reborn. Poem by Elizabeth Tyease Collins

.reborn.

Rating: 2.7


Within the minds of the sinner,
I am reborn.

Within the thoughts of the beggers and
choosers,
we are reborn.

I am within the heart of a lover
but close-minded he is.

His secrets buried deep within are
now exposed.

His mind spins uncontrolably and he
knows he's losing it.

His secrets now exposed I am
within the mind of a sinner,
and so I am reborn






Weird poem but I thought it was kinda cool.
I was watching Silent Hill when I wrote this ^-^

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent expression used here....Now that you have truth...you feel born again....wonderful write....different but wonderful

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 July 2009

His secrets now exposed I am within the mind of a sinner, and so I am reborn......... i will serve as mouthpiece to Fiona behind

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Fiona Davidson 19 July 2009

Excellent poetry...great to read...10+++

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