Reborn? Poem by Lim Renae

Reborn?

Rating: 2.8


Reborn from the earth
Torn from the sky

Why tease me with wings that don't fly?

These false hopes for freedom-
They bind

Its like being a prisoner
In my own mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amelia Butterfly 16 November 2006

This poem is utterly nonsensical and rediculous

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Ruby Root 05 July 2006

Hi Lim, Excellent poem written with compassion and saddness. It is true sometime we find it hard to escape mentally. Great form and the use of imagery was excellent. Take care.

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Lim Renae

Lim Renae

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