Red Poem by David Darbyshire

Red

Rating: 2.0


Red is the color of Earth
And Cosmic Suns Rebirth
Blue is the Color of Fire
It's as clear as a Safire
Green is the color of the Sea
Were all the Dolphins swim Free
Yellow is the color of our Ghost
But Red, is the color I like the Most

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 31 January 2006

Nice short poem, very colourful, nice imagery. I liked it a lot. Just a thought here, I think safire, is spelt sapphire, or is your word one I don't know? I think you are talking about a gem stone. Just thought I would bring it to your attention. I hope you don't mind. Love Ernestine XXX

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