Rejected Poem by Anders Lim

Rejected

Rating: 5.0


Stabbing jeers
Piercing lies
No one would look me in the eye

Life without
A single friend
A life without such is a wasted plan

Taunting faces
Filled with pride
The anguish is brewing deep down inside

So much trust
Put to vain
What do I get from each trial of pain

Red shot eyes
Bursting heart
My whole world is falling apart

Is this the truth
Is this my fate
What have I done to ignite so much hate

Take my life
Take my soul
Take every part of me that holds control

Bully the fickle
Befriend the strong
Destroy the place where I desire to belong

Break my spirit
Break my pride
There's nothing left for me to hide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 27 November 2008

an instrospective write..well expressed..greatly written..A10 Ency Bearis

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