Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Relationship


Offering: one MT love
Payment: one MT dream
Barter relationship

Offering: one hug and 10+
Payment: one kiss and 10+
Zero+ relationship

Offering: eight hours labor
Payment: one day survival
Exploitation relationship

Offering: lifelong service
Payment: pension benefit
Engineering relationship

Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009
Edited: Friday, June 26, 2009

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  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (6/26/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    Interesting poem. Whether cheerful? For me rather not. These are sad observations, if it is real. It is written very well but it doesn't surprise me. Your poems are being read with pleasure, since it is always possible to find something what will interest us in. (10 v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie James Nall (6/24/2009 8:04:00 AM)

    HAHAHAHA! ! ! good view of what some jobs should pay! ! ! good humour, my friend,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/24/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    This was kind of humour, satire, allegory type for sort of haiku piece...

    A unique poetic description of relationship...in just a few words you have described marvelously...a poem written meticulously.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 653 Points Marieta Maglas (6/24/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    I appreciate the finesse of speech and the acuity of observations about the reality of the day.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,696 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    Offering: lifelong service
    Payment: pension benefit
    Engineering relationship....... we do for growingthe relatiosnship. it is permanent bonding try and suceed also.... beautiful write...10

    read mine butteflies around and sparatw ways...tks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (6/24/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Very interesting and humorous write! As a relationship must work satisfactorily, so I'll give a tenner with a smile. (Report) Reply

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