Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 79 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Relationship - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Offering: one MT love
Payment: one MT dream
Barter relationship

Offering: one hug and 10+
Payment: one kiss and 10+
Zero+ relationship

Offering: eight hours labor
Payment: one day survival
Exploitation relationship

Offering: lifelong service
Payment: pension benefit
Engineering relationship

Comments about Relationship by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Meggie Gultiano Meggie Gultiano (6/26/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    enjoyed reading this..truly i am LOL (Report) Reply

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  • Karla Bardanza (6/26/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    I just luv the irony! Thanks also for commenting my poems.That was very kind of you. (Report) Reply

  • Kafil Uddin Raihan (6/26/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    Wellpenned the relation between complicated life and our deeds. (Report) Reply

  • Maria Barbara Korynt (6/26/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    Interesting poem. Whether cheerful? For me rather not. These are sad observations, if it is real. It is written very well but it doesn't surprise me. Your poems are being read with pleasure, since it is always possible to find something what will interest us in. (10 v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Rakesh Bedi (6/24/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    Hard realities of life in a witty fashion, good sir! (Report) Reply

  • James Nall (6/24/2009 8:04:00 AM)

    HAHAHAHA! ! ! good view of what some jobs should pay! ! ! good humour, my friend,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Catrina Heart (6/24/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    This was kind of humour, satire, allegory type for sort of haiku piece...

    A unique poetic description of just a few words you have described marvelously...a poem written meticulously.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (6/24/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    I appreciate the finesse of speech and the acuity of observations about the reality of the day.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    Offering: lifelong service
    Payment: pension benefit
    Engineering relationship....... we do for growingthe relatiosnship. it is permanent bonding try and suceed also.... beautiful write...10

    read mine butteflies around and sparatw ways...tks (Report) Reply

  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/24/2009 7:25:00 AM)

    various relationships...some exploiting...some casual...some long lasting brought out well in this write (Report) Reply

  • Priyanka Bhowmick (6/24/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    an interesting, mind blowing, humor filled poem... lovely! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ejaz Khan (6/24/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Very interesting and humorous write! As a relationship must work satisfactorily, so I'll give a tenner with a smile. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 26, 2009

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