Release My Mind Poem by Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Release My Mind

Rating: 4.8


I wish you would leave
let my body be at peace
Release my mind!
from its caged existance

Your only purpose is to torment
playing with my mind
pushing the boundries
and trying the sanity

You have no logic
or systematic approach
attacking the light
held within a soul

Your name is darkness
Your purpose is terrible
You release no mind
And wish to encage all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Routh 27 November 2005

your name is darkness says it all......beautiful, powerful, clear poem.

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Aaron Rigodon 18 November 2005

Great poem and I enjoy how you said it with passion. Somehow, I don't know maybe this poem can be talking about being a captive and wanting to be free from someone's hand! Sincerely, Aaron Rigodon

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Mary Nagy 18 November 2005

Very nice Stephanie. I'm enjoying your work very nice. sincerely, Mary

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Thomas Viruvelil 14 September 2005

Your mind can never get that release.Real good work Regards Thomas

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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

East London, South Africa
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