Remain Ordinary Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Remain Ordinary

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It is real curse if you fail
The knowledge to acquire or avail
Since it is considered as another birth
It’s usefulness for whole of life till death

Life is certainly with some mission
It is also necessary to fulfill the obligation
Towards family and children
To earn sufficient has to be the concern

Sincerity and honesty are two pillars
For successfully leading life like star
Let no material gain come but only name
Whole of the life is meant to claim

To act as guide and philosopher
One may need to be loner
To be fully aware of consciousness
One may need real shine on face

To remain as an ordinary
It is will not be difficult and necessary
To be rich or powerful
Simple devotion may make it more successful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Fulfillment Mikah White3 minutes ago I think this is a very good poem. Our greatest qualities are within ourselves. A little work on grammar would make this work great. Comment +1 shows that material objects are not what we need for happiness in life

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Buck Ramper6 minutes ago overall good mentality of why material possesions are not what make a person happy Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

s ago not my type of poem, but was good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

It is real curse if you fail The knowledge to acquire or avail

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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