Remember Poem by SunDos MAZ

Remember



remember that june when you where my only moon
I loved you like I never did
using my heart but not my head
you were my all!
I tried to gave you my soul
but how it would work
when you had never to my heart walk
its really hurt to see you hate
maybe it was my fault to love you more than you can hold
or because my lips were saying only you
excatly it was yours!
baby you broke my heart twice
by your lies first
and telling me that I am yours so!
oh my god how I did that
why I loved you and cared
at least don't let me see you please
go far and go away
how could I stand if I see you still
I swear to protect your love in me which is like the wind you can see it but you cant feel it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasser Koor 31 January 2009

ooooh what a sad poem. but it is great poem really it is deep fo sadness. how we can love and break up, , how we can leave our lovers how we can hurt each other how we can save the love between the lovers

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Sundos Mohammad 13 December 2008

thnks all for your comments :)

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Sebastine Humaemo 08 December 2008

lovely.....too sad goin thr your lines......thanks for sharing it..regards sebastine...

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sara }i{ 06 December 2008

humm...so sad but so beautiful u really touched me

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Fiona Davidson 06 December 2008

Beautiful heartfelt words here...thanks for sharing it..

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