Jayne Davies

Rookie - 120 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

Remember Me


I look beyond an endless sky,
To feel the tears fall from my eyes,
Remember us just as we were,
Then in the distance I still hear,
Those gentle words you'd often say,
I think about you every day,
The past has gone and with it took,
The love we had, my whole world shook.
Remember me, remember you,
Love is free, with heartache too.
Some scars don't heal, the pain still raw,
As time moves on, I need you more.
Will I always feel so blue,
Forever feel this love for you?
And as I look beyond the sky,
I wipe the tears and wonder why,
Some things, are just not meant to be,
Remember you, remember me.

Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 7,605 Points Sandra Feldman (8/13/2013 1:18:00 AM)

    I will Remember you're beautiful poem and its tender, forlorn sentiment. Thank you, very musical, tranmits a lot of feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points John Hess (7/7/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    Very touching... The heart aches for times of old, the trick is to move on- -so we are told. Keep writing it helps, and hopefully one day soon life will smile upon you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,217 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (6/24/2013 3:06:00 AM)

    some things are just not meant to be, it tells all about love and the residues of its aching memory. You have woven it nice Jayne. (Report) Reply

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