Heather Burns


Renewing Nature - Poem by Heather Burns

The rain gently falls

flooding the valleys nearby

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

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Comments about Renewing Nature by Heather Burns

  • Bronze Star - 2,205 Points Sallam Yassin (9/19/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    that grace of upper heaven
    intermingled with grace of lower
    earth so the life renewed in nature
    so sweet and brief (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/15/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    Rain makes things fresh, new, vibrant, full of life again! Nature and spirit! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/15/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    Rain is probanly nature's most crucial part of maintaining the cycle of life. From the sea to the mountain
    top water provides everything from food to oxygen needed for life to exist. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/15/2013 12:16:00 AM)

    Yes, rains bring life to the nature. Love senryu (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,840 Points Sekharan Pookkat (9/14/2013 8:20:00 PM)

    Little raindrops blush soil to blossom again (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (9/14/2013 4:28:00 PM)

    The rain can be a beautiful thing, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/14/2013 1:55:00 PM)

    Beautiful description Heather..loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/14/2013 1:19:00 PM)

    Heather nice senryu so nice description of rain and the property of revivalism I call it burst thank you beautiful so beautiful I can't compose such Senryu just learning from you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 11, 2014


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