Replaced Poem by liz caballero

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Rating: 3.0


i lie in my bed at night replayin
what we use to be i cant believe its over now and you have moved on without me another girl has taken
my place i hope she treats you well
id give anything to have you back
just thinking of you makes my heart cry i stare at you my feelings so strong i love everything you do
so how can you like someone
else when im still in love with you?

Saturday, December 17, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: taking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Odey Patrick 18 December 2011

nice poem liz...paints a picture i pray not to be caught in

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Diamond Williams 18 December 2011

'replaced' gets to the point...short and sweet I like it..

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