Reply To 'I'M Sorry' Poem by Julius Victorio

Reply To 'I'M Sorry'



Someone read
Another poets' tradgedy poems
Love poems
With a sad ending
and said:

'This poem was soo deep at the beginning
Until I got to the end...
I never thought
It would end that way...
I feel sorry for that boy...'

In reply he said back:

'The guy in the poem
Still thinks about her...
A lot.
He thinks about her every night
and how it would have turned out
If she liked him back
In the same way.
In turn he also thinks
About how he will continue his life
Without her.
He knows
There might be another
That he'll meet
Later on in life.
He knows
That he might find
Someone else
And have
A different relationship
With a different girl.
But he'll never...
Ever...
Forget the love
That he had
For that one girl
Even in the midst
Of all others.
Her name... I can't tell you
But I don't think I'll ever know
If I'll ever forget her...
Do you call that love?
Or an obsession? ...
Oh Lord have mercy
Upon my soul
And grant me peace...'

Now what do you think?
Isit love?
Or an obsession?
I still love her...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelic Warrior 18 June 2009

i would say that's love.....if you loved her.....truly loved her......not just a puppy love thing......but you forget those......things that truly touch your heart strings last forever....even if your the only one who feels them..... very well done 10++ :)

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