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Rating: 5.0

Pyaas lgi mujhko,
tuney paani b pila diya
Akela sa tha,
tuney dosto ko mila diya
Hr cheez mai paane k liye zid krta chla gya
Mere maa baap ne mjhe sb kuch dila diya
Galat raastey pe jaa rha tha zindagi ke,
Tuney ungli pakad sahi ore chala diya
Aakhri darkhaasht sun le meri
Mere dil ke bagh mei saare phool sukh gye hai
Paani daalne ko kisi maali se mila de
Ped nahi toh ek chhota पौधा hi sahi
Is banjar zameen pr ek इश्क़-ए-फूल khila de
✒Aayush

Tuesday, October 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,love,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Wow! What an amazing poem this is really! Water is given to drink to a thirsty person. Not, not alone you are as you have met friends. When flowers dry of in mind this provokes thought. A gardener needs to give water in roots of plant. This is garden of God and he is super gardener. He can only pour water of wisdom and mind can bloom as like as shiny, soft and fragrant flower. God the best and eternal friend ever. Brilliant poem is shared here...Rating 10/10....Welcome to PoemHunter.

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Aayush K Singh 10 October 2017

Thank you Sir for your appreciation ☺

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