Residues Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Residues

Rating: 5.0


I wish to leave those
Whose contributions
In my life was that of
A thick film of residues
Which accumulated
In the mirror of my heart
Which hazed my thoughts
And jeopardized my life

©Aarzoo Mehek

Residues
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pallab Chaudhury 04 December 2021

residue needs to be cleaned for a good maintenance worker...

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Rajnish Manga 27 November 2021

Very sensible observation and a legitimate line of action if we go by the corrosive minds and toxic times. Thanks a lot.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 27 November 2021

Better late than never... Wo afsana jise anjam tak lana no ho mumqin usse ek khubsurat mod dekar chhodna behtar...Wonderful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2021

A thick film of residues Which accumulated In the mirror of my heart....Yes, I do have the same philosophy. An excellent poem....top score!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2021

All things that jeopardize our mind must be eradicated to have a clear journey in life. A beautiful poem well expressed.

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