Restraint Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Restraint

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He is all about subtleties -
Half smiles, off-whites on cinco de mayo;
He gets around with restraint,
A sneaky shadow in a crowd!

Then he retires to a rocking chair
Pondering about today, old affairs,
They are vivid like scarlet on sand,
Then another shot of Sunset Rum!

Tuesday, July 10, 2018
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Vincent LeVine 10 July 2018

Spot on

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2018

They are vivid like scarlet on sand, Then another shot of Sunset Rum! ... very fine poem.. subtle and expressive.. tony

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

Thank you!

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 July 2018

nicely penned - They are vivid like scarlet on sand, Then another shot of Sunset Rum! .... pointless breath or the breath into thyself the earth is rounding one sip of RUM or lovelorn mourn! ! !

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

Gracias Mahtab.

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

Thank you Mahtab.

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